十 情景作文：人生哲理类（诱惑）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Good habits result from resisting temptation.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

（一）预测范文

There is a saying that “Good habits result from resisting temptation”, to which I can’t agree more. Unfortunately, lack of determined will and social experience, teenagers frequently fall into the traps of temptations such as Internet games, smoking, drinking, and so on.

In a bid to form good habits, one needs a strong will and perseverance to resist temptation. Numerous examples can be given but the following will suffice. The outstanding habit of reading classic literature on a regular basis is a case in point. Nevertheless, you would definitely have to spend less time on your favorite Internet games or fascinating mobile phones. Likewise, the good habit of doing exercises every day means repeatedly dragging oneself away from the TV series and cozy couch. These cases effectively clarify that good habits arises from resisting temptation.

As has been mentioned above, a wise mind and determined will should be gradually cultivated so that the adolescents can resist various bad temptations and form excellent habits. Just as Oscar Wilde, an esteemed British novelist put it, “I can resist everything except temptation.”

（二）参考译文

有句话说“好习惯来自于对诱惑的抵制”，我非常赞同这点。不幸的是，青少年缺乏坚定的意志和社会经验，总是陷入网络游戏、吸烟、喝酒等诱惑的陷阱。

为了养成良好的习惯，人们需要坚定的意志和恒心来抵制诱惑。有无数的例子可以证明，但下面这些例子足矣。经常阅读文学经典的好习惯就是其中之一。然而，你必须在心爱的网络游戏或诱人的手机上花费更少的时间。同样，坚持每天锻炼的良好习惯意味着日复一日强迫自己远离电视剧和舒适的沙发。这些例子有效地证明：好习惯源于对诱惑的抵制。

综上所述，我们年轻人应该逐渐培养明智的心态和坚定的意志，以便抵制各种各样不好的诱惑并形成良好的习惯。正如英国著名作家奥斯卡·王尔德所说：“除了诱惑，我什么都能抵制。”

（三）亮点词汇

result from 源于

temptation 诱惑

unfortunately 不幸的是

lack of 缺乏

social experience 社会经验

teenager 青少年

fall into the traps 坠入陷阱

Internet game 网络游戏

in a bid to 为了

form good habits 形成良好习惯

strong will 坚强意志

perseverance 坚持不懈

numerous 无数的

outstanding 杰出的

classic literature 经典文学

a case in point 一个恰当的例子

fascinating 迷人的

mobile phone 手机

do exercises 锻炼

repeatedly 反复地

drag oneself away from 强迫某人远离

TV series 电视连续剧

cozy 舒适的

effectively 有效地

clarify 阐明

wise mind 明智的心态

gradually 逐渐地

cultivate 培养

adolescent 青少年

various 各种各样的

esteemed 著名的

（四）道长点评

本文共三段、十句、178个词。第一段为观点陈述段，共两句：首句通过谚语引出主题；第二句交代背景。第二段为举例论证段，共六句，是“总—分—总”结构。首句是主题句；第二句为过渡句，起到承上启下的作用；第三、四两句为第一个例子；第五、六两句为第二个例子。第三段为归纳结论段，共两句，首句为结论句，尾句引用名言。

（五）句型拓展

① If teenagers stop such time-and-health-consuming activities as playing Internet games and spend the time reading several pages of books every day instead, a good habit of reading will be formed and their academic performance will be greatly improved. 如果年轻人停止诸如玩网络游戏等既浪费时间又损害健康的活动，转而每天读几页书，他们会养成良好的阅读习惯，学习成绩也会极大提高。

② The world is filled with various kinds of temptation: luxurious designer clothes, round-the-clock TV shows, fascinating Internet games especially to the youngsters, and so on. 社会上充满了各种各样的诱惑，奢侈的名牌服装、全天候的电视节目以及年轻人尤其沉迷的网络游戏等。

③ Developing outstanding habits, undoubtedly, involves great perseverance and determination to stand against a variety of temptations around us. 养成良好的习惯无疑需要极大的毅力和决心来抵抗身边的各种诱惑。